Are you dissapointed? by JnM92
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This a song i wrote, please comment:
Are you dissapointed, dissapointed in me?
If you are i know why, yeah i know why.
I left you alone, its as simple as that.
I ran as fast as i could, after all the things i said.
Please dont talk, i know what you'll say.
You'll say its oke but it isn't, no way.
I cant change things ive done, cant make feelings stop.
I can help you coming up, i can help you wake up.
I yelled out, i screamed out.
Saying: ohh please come back.
My head hurted, my mind flew.
Thinking of what to do.
You said: ohhhh its oke,
I said: no it isnt, no way.
But ill let you live, ill make my way.
Take my hand, or stay.
Feelings are just feelings, but what you feel is real.
What you feel changes your ways, they let you kneel.
Begging for some silence, hoping for inner rest.
You think your overreacting, but your just doing your best.
And all that i know wasnt true, when i was with you.
I couldnt figure out, yeah that felt so good.
For once my head was clear, no mess.
And yours was too, at least i thaught so.
Things went bad, things went wrong.
I ran away, i couldnt be so strong.
I didnt try to talk, i acted strange.
Now i want to talk but your not in range.
I yelled out, i screamed out.
Saying: ohh please come back.
My head hurted, my mind flew.
Thinking of what to do.
You said:ohh you were right,
I said: Just stay at my side..
But ill let you live, ill make my way.
Take my hand, or stay.
Ive been so stupid, but i helped you all along.
Things i said made an impact, but carried you away.
You helped me too, thank you for that.
It will all be allright, i bet
Comments (4)
se_400_Lux
Very Cool....
BBarbs
I like this poem. It starts out so sad and ends with a somewhat positive note. Might be a little better with less rhyming. Keep up the good work !!!
DennisReed
Well expressed, do you have the music down?
JnM92
I do:)..