No rhythm, just rhyme 2 by SusiQ
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Another piece of play,
to have my say,
whittle time away,
to waste the day
LoL
Will try for longer sentences when I have more time....
Hugs all!
Word feast.
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Just a piece
of sloppy grease
from your niece
makes you obese.
Call the police
to decrease
the crease
of fleece
and release
not increase
the peace
in Greece.
So let's stay
and play,
be gay
so they
can say
they'd stray
and go away
to pray
in May
wearing gray,
to sway
not betray
the ballet
today.
Comments (9)
RGUS
Could almost put this to music Sue... it kinda flicks off your tounge and you can't help reading it again and again... guess I like tounge flicking...LOL (V)
SusiQ
LoL, you and your active tongue Deane... Will have to write something about that....
STEVIEUKWONDER
Goodness Sue, I don't think Deane's tongue has ever been so flicked! Lovely work. Nice and crisp and sharp. Well done! Steve :o)
Hopalong
The motto is not bad but reverse so: Another piece of play/ to have my say/ whittle away time/, and waste the day/....which adds rhythm and interest, making the reader wonder if you are wasting your time writing why is not he, she, or it wasting time in reading it. So also any enormous tome which sets out to prove that the subject, chronicled in great detail, is non-existent or unimportant (Example: The History of Russian Philosophy). Carpe Diem and all that...The rest is pretty much a waste of time, and without the serious play of your last....
TheWarlock
hahahahahahaa..... OMG!!!
busi2ness
If I may say/ I enjoyed the play/ and for more I pray...
TallPockets
In the words of a young, Peter Frampton: "Baby I love your way". WINK. Excellent!!
PeeWee05
Damn you're good at this and they actually make sense!!!
DennisReed
Again, most enjoyable! :)