Getting old.. by SANDSTORM
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I finally gathered some strength and courage to post this.. This is officially my first post in renderosity.. I am still yet a beginner, but i want u 2 b as harsh as u can get in criticism.. I wanna learn and ur comments and directioning is Most Welcome..
I'll post the credits of the stuff i used as soon as i gather them, sorry..
Comments (12)
rosemarygo
beautiful eyes and skintone. Very well done. Welcome. :)
squirrel2005
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh she is GOREGEUS!!! Would love to look like that!!!Those eyes are like real.. and the texture... good it neat!
Riyad_hasan
wow! really the eyes look real!
brycek
Very beautiful..wonderful texture and lighting!!
Rynn
Well, I myself am also a person who likes to read constructive critics on my work. It's a hobby for me, but that doesn't mean I don't want to improve right? With that explained I want to add that I most certainly am not someone who knows heaps but I do think I can perhaps give you some helpful comments. The 3d render itself is excellent in my opinion. I think the texture, lighting and pose is perfect for a portrait like this. The painted hair is in general not bad. The way the hair falls looks realistic to me (from the few times I tried to paint hair I can say that that is already a very good thing to be able to do). Perhaps some more detail would be nice. I also think you would like to practise on painting the parts where the hair and face touch (sorry english is not always easy for me so I hope you understand what I mean). I think you could benefit from some advice by someone who is good at painting on poser renders. Hope that helps a bit. :)
FS
Beautiful lighting,render and expression! Excellent!!!
meselfr
welcome... nice work... nice eyes.. :)
vulcanccit
I think you did wonderful!!
dreamlight
Thats one h#l of a pose! Cool!
GreyPixel
This is fantastic for a first post!!! Well done! Looking forward to more of your work!
Zazou
Excellent lighting, pose and texture. The hair looks good, but why didn't you used a 3D model ?? Kozaburo has really great hair for free (http://digitalbabes2.com/), so realist, they will fit wondefully with your model. Try them for your second post... :)
UrbanChilli
She looks great! I have a friend that I havn't seen for more than 10 years and this is how I think she looks like now. I agree with Rynn, where the hair grows from the head infront of the ear, I think that is to close to the eye, should be closer to the ear. But all in all, a good hair paint.