For the record by NothingNess
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It's the nature of things to fade When it's gone what will you remember? Who did you love? What did you love? If it's not there anymore where did it go? Was it real or just desperation on our parts? In the beginning there was love There were dreams built on house of cards In the middle we fought one another And brushed away the hands of fate No thing lasts forever It's not meant to Not love Not even the pain that follows Let it be stated For the record I loved you Move along; there's nothing left here
Comments (5)
DennisReed
Powerful piece, and seems there will be more to tell as life moves along!
drace68
Great writing with a wry close. By creating that last line, I think you're doing okay. Hope so -- Dick
SusiQ
That last line completes it and gives it the twist that's needed. Great write.
TallPockets
Wonderful piece!!
Shabetei
I really love the first line in this! And the last line sandwiches it all in.