super non c'che dire

wow nice work so far, you need to put that perspective drawing to work now hehe Man its been sooo long since i sat and tried to draw using the 2 point perspective way my art teacher showed me =/ I think if you widen the pads end thats toward us that might be whats throwing ya off. Not anything drastic but i think it will give you that "cornered" look if that makes any scense lol Found this http://www.geocities.com/~jlhagan/K9-14/draw_four.htm maybe it will help? Cheers its looking awesome!

well about your question.. about the light no i think the lights is perfect but the pattern on the wall is a bit to strait.. hope you'll know what i mean.. wow i cant wait to see this picture.. it's going to be great.. you are an amazing artist.. V Z

I just noticed this. It looks awesome! I can't paint but I can draw although I don't do it much. I don't know why but I'll follow my instinct, I think I would show more of the right wall and less of the left wall, I think that might help... Beautiful work!

This is too cool! I agree with Adiene though, widening the pads closest to the viewer will give more of the perspective you're looking for I think. The lighting is spot on as far as I'm concerned :) Looking fantastic and I can't wait to see the finished piece! huge hugz :)

Very very cool! So cool its beyond cool, its like coooooooool. I even feel the urge to say man after that. Yes. "Cooool Man"

I think the tight sheet mask a good idea,but do it gently and put the full expression into the contortion of the face appearing bewildered by the event,as opposed to the silent scream that is the usual obvious way to go.great job on contortion of body within jacket,this is going to be good

I can't wait to see the finished piece. I think to darken up the left wall would come nice. More creepy.

That is sooooo COOOOOL!!!!! Magnificent WIP!!! That's a very original idea and I can't wait to see the finished image!!! V :)

Awesomer & Awesomer!

I think it's coming along beautifully. I like the light actually with the touch of shadow behind the figure. Great idea with the mask. Very clever.

I like the one on the right... it looks better to have her right in the corner so as not to detract from the fact that she is the focal... I love what you're doing :)

this is abso-freakin-lutely amazing! fantastic work from an immensly talented artist! bravo!

Looking Great so far. Excellent

I'm going to let everyone else tell you about perspective . . . Want to ad some drama and history to why she's locked up? Add some bloody spots the her skirt and peeking from under the straight jacket, maybe a little rip in the skirts cloth . . . I know you've already done the straps to the walls, but shouldn't she be making some of them strained against her weight, like she's pulling to get free?? I don't know, just an idea?? You can smack me if you wish! XOXO

This work looks magnific so far!, i dunno but looking to the main scene i would imagine a cushion wall, you know, those room with soft covered walls, the big one seems like a dungeon bricks wall and the left version looks so hard and danrgeours for herself, lol..all in all the image is turning into a fantastic one!

I love your idea about clinging to her face with the sheet, and given how you've painted her jacket, I can already see it finished in my head. Your POV is perfect for what you're going for, but the wall seems a bit too light on the left side. The jacket & sheet could provide enough contrast on their own if the room was that dark all the way around. I really like where this is going so far, and I can't wait to see the next stage. Keep it up Mike! - Matt

I like the background on the right. The lighting seems to make more sence if her left side is darker. That perspective looks good. Maybe it would be better not to have the sheet mask so we could see the expression in the eyes. The main selling point of any expression is in the eyes. What ever you deside will be great. Like my mom used to say, "He who is doing it is doing it right!"

I really get fascinated on what you can do with your 2 hands.. Its fantastic!

Prefer the image on the right. If you wanted to show her more contrasted, you could make the corner very dark and simply have it fade to lighter towards the edges of the image. As for perspective, it looks fine to me. Its so close in and the perspective points are so far off it looks normal and doable.

Yep - I think the right image is better than the left - the lighting makes more sense. Not sure about the sheet over the face... I'm in 2 minds - was wanting to see her face, but like the sheet idea too... fantasic so far anyway!!!

the perspective adds even more creepyness to this - and I like the light a lot, it gives the illusion of a person that is trying to get out of the dark - matches the theme at it's best!

personally i would go all "Hellraiser" on her face.....her body is chained up...i think her face should be too...with piercings pulling her face and mouth into the scream......

sure I love the covering of the face you suggested,perspective,would'nt worry abot that,I guess it's a padded room,probally make more of a impression on that,leaning against it,other than that DAMN NICE!

Hmmmm... Thought I commented before... Ummm... I'm not good enough to tell you what to do with it. All I know is that, whatever you decide to do with it, it will be awesome! :)

i happened to see the finished render before i looked at your samples, or your beggining attempts. very very interesting the way you do this. im not a renderer. i just enjoy them, check them out. so i saw the finishied "nurse" and thought, "damn, that is freaky scary. wonder how you create these?" i see some of how it works now. very cool to post these pre-images!! bitchen