Excellent as usual, ma'am... I'd love to see it a little bigger, though... Part of it got lost on the shrinking process... :P Anyway, the story is going good, but I wonder how's Kathy doing... Oh... btw, James said hi to his brother... ;)

Nice job Shelly. YOu did good with what you had. Keep it comming. Oh.......Are they getting together???? wink LOLOLOL

fantastic work shelly this is a great first attempt. Yes it's tough to fit it all in when there is a lot of writing. Yot just need to bring the text size up a bit and you're on the way. Yah baby now you're talking

Great job, Shelly --- I agree with the above comments. Enlarge the font size a little for easier reading. I admire your devotion and skill using Photoshop Elements -- that's what I started out with. Keep going --- let's see more!

Excellent work Shelly..nicely laid out and great continuity. The plants add to the overall flavour....Now you're flowing....Well done.

I think this is beter than you give yourself credit for, the layout of the office is realistic, there is plenty of interesting props in every shot, all the shadows work, none are too dark, the expressions are not exagerated but are noticable-if I said anything was wrong with this, youd probably think I was being mean and picky!.V.

Go Shelly, this is awsome. You better do more of these so I can subcribe! Really cool camera angles.Great work mate!!!

Once again, a fine job! This style suits you. : ) I agree with boolean, the camera angles are very cool! You know, you have a real knack for expressions that really show the viewer the inner thoughts of the character. Nicky's face in the last frame tells it all. It's as if she's dreaming about what Luc just said. And she knows he's right! :D

Shelly! I agree with all of these folks!! you are way tooo hard on yourself, this is awesome! your best yet!! its all wonderful and it shows a lot of work was put in it!!! Im interested to see how Chuck fares! heheheheheh -Chuck

Wow, you just keep progressing in leaps and bounds! This is awesome for try #1, and it will only get better, knowing you! Keep the flame!

Looking real good Shelly. You got style gal!!!

Hey, good artists don't need all the toys :) and you've sure proved that...having said that, am looking forward to seeing what you do when you DO get Comic Book Creator..am sure you'll just keep getting better...

You certainly have the makings of a visual storyteller. However, you could do better justice to your fine work, if you got some comic fonts (good, free fonts on www.blambot.com). An easy way to make reasonably good "bubbles" is to - write the text in any word processing app (I use plain ol' Wordpad) - hit PrtScr key to grab the screen - paste into a 2D app - select (using box or ellipse selection) the bubbles (antialias on!) - and paste into a separate layer on top of your pictures layer - ...and add "tails" by point-to-point select a triangle, and fill w/ white Once Comic Book Creator arrives, you might not even need it anymore ;o) Just kidding, it seems to be very fine app for comics work. It just seems to me that you can do great work even without it.

Well thank you so much Thip for the tips. When I start back up I'll be sure to put your advice to work. Hugs Shelly!