untitled by cagewench

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jun 04, 2006

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Take my soul and translate it from its foreign language into something more tangible
Words and scents sensations and tastes so that I can be understood (and understand) so that my way shall be clear
Free me from opaque interpretations based on emotional reactions and logical arguments suppositions and guesses
Where is the proof that there are meaning in all things for I now find faith and belief to be insufficient fuel

Comments (8)

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experimental

8:32PM | Sun, 04 June 2006

Oh how I've missed your words during my intermittent hiatus, and I have to say that nothing shall ever translate the soul, it's mystery is what fuels those half hearted beliefs that so many will kill for. I personally believe that once we learn to look beyond the soul and into the heart of matters, faith will be a non-essence. I thank you for shining your brilliant lights on this subject, for so many will only ignore it until the day they die.

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Ensomniac

9:10PM | Sun, 04 June 2006

Hi Cara Mae. I wonder if there's a program out there for that. I bet there will be some day. Or a pill. Who knows, maybe sooner than we think. This is beautifully written and felt. Thanks for sharing, it's nice to see you again.

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cagewench

9:27PM | Sun, 04 June 2006

Thank you... this is the first poem I've written in months and of course I had to come and share it :)

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redbeard

9:56PM | Sun, 04 June 2006

Perfectly crafted and beautifully written. The soul as a foreign language is a great metaphor, never fully translatable, always a being unto itself that no one else can ever understand. As for finding meaning I personally no longer search, never having found anything. Perhaps the knowledge the others feel the same was is connection enough.

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cagewench

9:58PM | Sun, 04 June 2006

Thank you... and you make an interesting point... re: others feeling the same

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