A bouquet of flowers (wip) by DarkShadeOfWhite
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This picture is unfinished, but I don't know what to do with it. So if you can comment and tell me what works or not that would help me greatly.
This picture reflects a poem I wrote called "A Bouquet of Flowers."
I hate you
Here is a bouquet of flowers
With stemmed roses to puncture your soul
Yet you will show no suffering and conceal all emotions
I love you
Here is a bouquet of flowers
Take a moment to smell their flowing beauty
Holding on to the same sharp frailties
Dark and elegant like you
Here is a bouquet of flowers
Wilting with me in a tragic dance of destiny
Thank you for your thoughts.
Comments (8)
ladynimue
I would not change a petal, exquisite as is. Combined with the poem this becomes a very powerful image!
Valandar
Wow... and I really like how it's "pouring" out of the fixture on the bottom...
ShadowWind
Cool image...
unyon
Great image - I love the 'fluid into form'
jeweldragon
EXCELLENT!!! wow i love this
Black
Leave it I'd say. IT's the kind of picture that is just "NOT RIGHT" but just FORCES you to have to accept it as it is. When you just step abit back and look at it on a black background... you notice the beauty of the composition and concept! It's again up to you, but I would have to say that I think that you would kill something from it with anything you would add to what it already is
DarkShadeOfWhite
Thank you all, I think I will just leave it as it is :)
vod
Yes, I understand your feeling about this image, a sort of not totally controlled result, it's a strange "work" to accept it... ...Very nice.