Public Baths by Riquelme8

Bryce • Scenic • posted on Jun 18, 2006

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Want to go swimming?

Comments (11)

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Mondwin

6:37AM | Sun, 18 June 2006

really a very brilliant artwork!!!bravo!V:DDD.Hugsxx

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supermarioART

8:49AM | Sun, 18 June 2006

BEAUTIFUL IMAGE and lights!!!

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webdancer

9:23AM | Sun, 18 June 2006

Gorgeous! Love the atmosphere and play with shadows!

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steve100

10:02AM | Sun, 18 June 2006

Great lighting and atmo, well done.

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Riquelme8

12:02PM | Sun, 18 June 2006

Thanks about your comments:) Nice to hear some positive feedback, but I would like to hear also how I could improve this pic... is there something missing or wrong? Idea of this pic was to try tthose light rays and how the shadows act and then create peaceful and relaxed atmosphere...

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donniemc0

3:03PM | Sun, 18 June 2006

this is a beautiful image. my suggested improvements would be to change the water material, it looks to much like a sea. also there is a slightly odd object next to the girl which also casts a shadow and for me that jars the symmetry of the piece. and finally (thank goodness says Riquelme8) reduce the size of the wall material slightly, i think the stones look too large. having said all that,(these are minor adjustments) you have captured a mood of serenity here which is awsome!

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skiwillgee

10:57PM | Sun, 18 June 2006

Beautiful image, constructive comment since you asked. Agree with above about water mat, too wavey for indoor pool. Soften shadows. I'd try turning off cast shadows completely and place a sceond spot behind girl inside the room to cast the shadow so there wouldn't be any oversized shadows from the window lattice. Also why no light beaming in fm other windows? You have the makings of a truly wonderful render. These are just my opinions

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Riquelme8

9:50AM | Mon, 19 June 2006

Thanks again... constructive comments are those what I need! I agree with those points you mentioned and I started to wonder why I haven't figured out those myself:) Maybe because this was one of the first Bryce works of mine and the first where I used Poser figures( thats why they are so distant and dark:) and I was then quite satisfied with the result. But now you gave me an isnpiration to do this again and believe me.. I will as soon as I got time!!! Thanks:)

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mac4gman

5:08PM | Wed, 21 June 2006

I wouldn't quibble with the lighting, could just be the only window getting direct light. I really like the effect - well done! Add me to the list of people who'd like to see you do more with this one. Don't really think you need to change the water - just put someone in the pool on the left side, to give the ripples a source...? And I'll repeat myself (at the risk of seeming rude/crude) - bring your people out of the shadows and start doing more with them. Bravo!

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Ethereal1

3:30PM | Tue, 27 June 2006

Fantastic piece and lighting.

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zaffen

5:23PM | Tue, 28 November 2006

There is no need to change anything. The eye is immediately drawn to the figure which was the intent of the piece. Everything else is incidental. Well done indeed.