The Beach by vaggabondd
Close
Hover over top left image to zoom.
Click anywhere to exit.
Members remain the original copyright holder in all their materials here at Renderosity. Use of any of their material inconsistent with the terms and conditions set forth is prohibited and is considered an infringement of the copyrights of the respective holders unless specially stated otherwise.
Description
TODAY
WE MEET
HELD YOUR HAND
YOU WINKED AT ME
THEN I KISSED YOUR LIPS
STROLL ON THE BEACH AT SUNSET
THE COOL WAVES PLAYED WITH OUR TOES
FOUND A PRIVATE COVE JUST AROUND THE BEND
EVER SO SLOWLY WE SLIPPED EACH OTHERS CLOTHS OFF
GULLS CIRCLE SINGING A LOVE SONG FOR MOOD
FROLICKING WE DIVE INTO DEEP BLUE SEA
THE MOONLIGHT GLISTENS ON HER BREAST
KISSING EACH OTHER VERY PASSIONATELY
MOANING, GROANING LIKE PIGS
SHE STARTS SCREAMING
SHARK, SHARK
SHAR
Comments (4)
vaggabondd
This is what happens when you are fighting writers block. lol This poem goes from 1 to 9 words per line then back to one again.
drace68
Great twist. For me, the form detracts from the story, which roars at the end. Had the trysting trailled off in delighted exhaustion, the 1-9-1 form would fit. -- Dick
Syltermermaid
Could be from Roald Dahl or Steven King!!LOL Excellent made with an interesting twist on the end!!!! Hugs Ute
Wolfspirit
This writing brought laughter, and thanks for sharing.