A Nourishing Oasis by maki6
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Description
my hair conditioner
promises a nourishing oasis,
which is the outcome
of countless hours of market research
and consumer data
categorized and analyzed
by highly educated and dedicated
business men and women
to forecast a percentage rise
in volume sales in the 21-35 age group
based on the notion
of the 21st century need for nourishment
and the rest of oasis
in the hustle and bustle of modern times
and is sad
but it is even sadder
that a 48 year old man
believes his 48 year old
grey and thinning hair
requires conditioning
Comments (4)
heartnsoul
Excellent writ! This would also do well in a societal category. A great response and introspection to the marketing/adversting world. G, I wonder, has anyone really gotten an orgasm from using Herbal Essence?!Wonderful flow as this just moves effortlessly down the page. Thank you for sharing.
drace68
"O" or not, does it clean the hair without smelling frou-frou? Second question, what's the price point? Yeah, I'm past 48. Nice writingbtw. Neat twist.
TallPockets
Superb take on modern day sales. People will swallow/buy most anything these days. Just look at the voting booths. WINK. My best, keep writing. T.P.
MidnightPlatinum
Lol, I like this. I hope you can see how funny and refreshing your over analysis is on paper. I get like that too sometimes. Good poem.