Tranquil by Cobthaich

Vue • (none) • posted on Jan 13, 2002

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I would love comments as to how to improve this:)

Comments (6)

RayTraz

11:55AM | Sun, 13 January 2002

Im not familiar with Vue so I cant give you suggestion on how to improve this. However I think this is nice.

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Varian

12:53PM | Sun, 13 January 2002

Quite nicely done! The composition and lighting look good. Unsure what the red splotch is to the right of the couples' feet? The stars seem too large and too intense for so much daylight remaining. Very serene image. Drop by the Vue forum for detailed feedback, questions, resources, etc. :)

ladynimue

3:24PM | Sun, 13 January 2002

I love how the falling stars mirror the couple falling in love! Made me feel all warm and happy inside. Thanks for posting :)

Sacred Rose

12:44AM | Mon, 14 January 2002

Very sweet, peaceful image. I agree with varian about the size of the stars and the little red thing near their feet..but artistic license allows us to do a lot of things we wouldnt normally get away with LOL I could suggest that your smooth her elbow edge and crease slightly - it has the poser collision point showing, although it's not too bad. I think it is a lovely image :)

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artistheat

5:02PM | Mon, 14 January 2002

very nice work,great scene

Cobthaich

7:37PM | Mon, 14 January 2002

Thanks a lot for the responses, really appreciate them:) I've followed all of your advice and changed the scene accordingly. If there is anything else I would greatly appreciate the feedback