Born Free..please look and give me suggestions... by Tegan_DrWho
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Comments (2)
Little_Dragon
Good job of posing the horses. Suggestions: turn on Antialiasing, and add shadows in postwork.
VirtualSite
The horses look really good -- nice work on the manes and tails. My comment is more compositional than anything else: your title is "Born Free", and yet the two horses are locked in a small bright spot and encircled by darkness; it's almost like they're visually restrained to the viewer. If I may suggest: open up the lights around them and rebuilt the background so it's filled with light. Set your shadow color for a light grey, not the default medium. Then reposition your horses so they're not cropped off at the bottom; bring them more in command of the image. One last thing, just to consider: take them down in size, so the scale of the landscape is opened up a bit more -- again, to create the impression that all this is their domain.