The Inefectual Mace by BeanoftheWest
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Description
This is a 45 min project that I whiped together for my modeling I class. I invite those of you who know what you're doing to be brutaly critical and tell me how I can become better
Comments (8)
Revelation-23
Looks pretty good. It would probably be more effective if it didn't completely dwarf the egg by such a huge amount. And if the springs were rusty, if could prove to be rather effective in the long run if used against something other than an object. But that's probably not the point. And I'm not thinking all too clearly at the moment, so feel free to ignore anything I've said. What did you model and render this in?
FREAKYALV
LOOKS PRETTY COOL TO ME, AND NOT THAT I CAN TALK SHIT OR BAD CAUSE IM NOT GREAT AT ALL, BUT OU SHOULDVE MADE THE ENTRY PIONT WHERE THE SPRING GOES INTO THE SOCK OR WHATEVER WITH SOME SORT OF INDENTATION OR SHADING. BUT LIKE I SAID I REALLY HAVE NO ROOM TO TALK, IT LOOKS REALLY COOL!
acclaude
EXCELLENT !!! LOLLL xxxxx
Lashia
Great work. For those of us who DONT know anything about it... its a great image :-) I like the idea behind it, very cool. :-)
ZIKEO
Great image!!! I don't know about inefectual, I've been hit by a bed spring in my sleep. It Smarts!!! ;@
BeanoftheWest
Thanks for the comments folks. I think I WILL try to make some marks in the burlap where the springs are sticking out, rust may improve the overall reality of the mace, and I too have had bad run-in's with bedsprings... perhaps some rubberized tips would make for a decrease in accidental gougings.... Thanks large 'beans.
Max-UK
i laughed heartily,excellent theme and idea. the springs are superb,the cloth covering is even better,and how did you texture the shaft?..you got the grain just right. theres sod al i could critique it on,other than theres no hair tangled in the springs ;)))) j/k
morin3000
Lovely colors and lighting === A wonderful mace you have made here === Excellent work === Have an awesome day === !!!*****!!!
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