Another Day' The learning Curve by jimw1

Cinema 4D • Work In Progress • posted on Aug 27, 2006

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My first real attempt at c4d. still struggling with the lighting and Objects. All comments tips etc welcome.Post work Just the Frame/border thanks to Laurence for the tip which i havent got to grip with yet.

Comments (22)

gayles

8:59AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Amazing I just love your work, keep it up Smiles Gayle,

glikamou

9:17AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Lighting needs a little work like you said, But I only noticed that because you pointed it out!!!! Its a great piece, and it achieves an air of dignity

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Lenord

9:22AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Looks like it's comming along to me, but your the one Driving that thing. I dig the reflection on the wall, very real. You will get the hang of it Jim, just keep plugging away. &

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CarolSassy

9:42AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Looking GOOD Jim! I love this one! Practice makes perfect, and I'll be right here hanging around your gallery! lol q-: Gorgeous image 'n' great atmosphere! (:

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cshark

9:58AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Love the arches, not too keen on the lighting, or the chairs under the arch, and to be really picky, the reflection on the floor is a little high.

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3D_Explorer

10:12AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

I take issue with the proportion of the objects in the scene. The arches are too low and the fireplace too small. Some fill lighting in the darkest areas would look nice as well. With that said, it's far better than my first try.

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Xantipa

10:30AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Proportions is not right. Atmosphere is wonderful. I send you materials for Cinema, You send me adress. I work in Softimage XSI. Eva

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chachi

10:41AM | Sun, 27 August 2006

I think you are doing a great job Jim!! For not working in C4D that much you are really coming along well. remeber, if you need help I am just an email away..lol! ;) chachi

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BBarbs

1:29PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

WOW. You are a natural at using all these programs. I have not tried this one, but I am still plugging along in Bryce. Actually did a couple that I am going to upload. You are so far ahead of me technically that it amazes me. Amazes me what I dont know. Fantastic work !!! WOW. I am impressed !

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jimw1

1:33PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Thanks for your observations' I take the point on Proportions and the lighting. I have redone what i can' i think the Proportions are something like they should be now' I am happy with the lighting although Im not an expert in c4d....and although i am struggling with the floor I think this will stay I like the reflections.. Thanks Jim

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Trepz

2:21PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

Yeah,leave the floors,there gorgeous.Only thing i see are the reflections of the chairs seem to be a bit jagged,but this is nicer than anything i have done in a long while so i will shut up:D Inspirational for me as well(on goes the lightbulb)

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skiwillgee

4:08PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

I'm a little late to put in two cents worth since you've picked up on the proportioning thing. I smiled when I read the comment from a viewer about shiney floor. LOL that's a Jimw1 trademark! I think your shiney base plains are awesome.

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Burpee

10:21PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

I think it looks wonderful! I'd like a bit more dramatic lighting but that will come with practice. Still a beautiful and interesting room :)

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ywaters

11:24PM | Sun, 27 August 2006

What a wonderful piece of art!! Thanx for sharing!!

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evinrude

1:49AM | Mon, 28 August 2006

Beautiful. Great mat work!

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IO4

2:53AM | Mon, 28 August 2006

Great attempt! I would agree about the reflections on the floor.I love the stone texture, and the overall mood of the image:)

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sackrat

4:31AM | Mon, 28 August 2006

Nicely done.

Valerie-Ducom

10:12AM | Mon, 28 August 2006

wowwwwwwwww, fantastic image and excellent presentation my friend!! Good day and hugs ;)

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TexasAngel

8:28PM | Mon, 28 August 2006

This is totaly awesome!!! Very original! I love the lighting and the scene is PERFECT!!!!

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brubright

2:28PM | Mon, 11 September 2006

A beautiful image..yet a sense of sadness. An instrument to produce tremendous emotion, with the ability to provoke deep meaningful thought, or to calm the savage ravishings of a tormented mind. And yet, no one to listen, and no artist to play. And so, the music remains but an unheard symphony of the tides and turns of life. Beautiful work! Very Well Done. 5+

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