Love me if possible by WiseHanna
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Description
Love me if possible
I'm not good looking,
And not at all smart.
My left leg's shorter,
Eyes are set apart
Comments (8)
WeeLaddie
Well done, you got here at last: Great fun, your poem's a blast. A bit clunky in the metre, needs polishing, but very humorous and entertainingly informative. A very promising effort.
sky13point1
Very fun! Love a gal with chutzpah. Thanks for sharing :)
TallPockets
I really enjoyed this piece and the accompanying artwork! Being taught to never ask a 'ladies' age, I will ever so politely ask if you've ever heard the old hit song by The Dave Clark Five - You Got What It Takes. (GREAT lyrics and beat!). WELCOME to the writer's gallery, kind soul. My best to you and yours. WRITE ON! TallPockets/brian.
WiseHanna
Thanks for reading and commenting. I'd love to "polish" this poem, for it's one of my favourits. Suggestions please? Hanna
DreamweaverNZ
A most enjoyable read Hanna ...Light and breezy ... You haven't overdressed with decorative lines making pleasant reading. Looking forward to reading more. Cheers, Sammy
morin3000
Lovely colors and lighting
A wonderful image you have made here Excellent workHave an awesome day ~~*****()~~ ThanksWiseHanna
Sammy and Morin, thanks for your comments. Hanna
meico
Personally, I like the choppiness of the lines - I think this fits well with your assertion of honesty and 'blunt speaking'. As a whole it is witty with just the right amount of bittersweet self-depecation. I enjoyed the read greatly. I liked the lady in question, and that's what matters most. Mike