Make Believe Corners by miserys_extacy
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Description
This is all created.
I know,
the artificial environment,
where the corners seep into darkness,
make interactions between us
so much more intimate.
A fabrication spun from your fingertips,
I won
Comments (3)
TallPockets
Lovely little piece. Methinks you should never have to 'work' at something you truly LOVE. Relax, kind soul. Breathe Deep. I'm reminded of the old saying, "Even a broken clock is right TWICE a day". WINK. Let it come to you, naturally. Don't force it. My best to you and yours, TallPockets. (btw: these are only my 'thoughts'. I also 'thought' by now that Miss Halle Berry and I would be married with five children. WINK).
meico
Very creative and highly effective use of line spacing ... it gives the reader space and time to ponder and to recollect and thus connect with the poem as a whole ... and don't forget corners can turn into safe havens when we really need them. Thoughtful piece, and very readable. Excellent.
WiseHanna
I totally agree with Meico. Enjoyed reading. In the following line, I think the word "imaginary" which is an adjective, followed by a verb, should be replaced by a noun - "imagination" or "imagining". "It seems more often than not, imaginary feels closer to honest," Thanks for sharing. Hanna