Front Row Seats for Mullaney Rose and digimon by mamabobbijo
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Front Row Seats
Back porch, rockin' chair just before sundown
Nana rockin' Baby, they're listenin' to the nightsounds.
Sun paints the twilight purples and blues
Breeze pulls the cloud quilt off the face of the moon
Chair creaks, Baby sighs and snuggles deeper down
Ah, to spend forever here wrapped together in the nightsounds
The leaves are rustling gently as the nightsounds all begin
That warming up of instruments as they one by one join in
Nana rockin' Baby as the moonlight streaming down
Paints magic in the backyard to the concert of the nightsounds
The tree frogs are chirping and an owl gently calls
A bullfrog adds a bass beat from a pad down by the falls
The waves are keeping time as they lap upon the shore
The whirring of cicadas cycle up from whisper to roar
Baby's gettin' heavy as she drifts gently into sleep
To the softly lilting lullaby of chirp and hoot and peep
On moonbeams comes a Dreamship,I don't know where we're bound
But we'll journey into Everland surrounded by the concert of the nightsounds
Comments (17)
mamabobbijo
This is my first attempt. With much help from those who answered my cry in the chatroom. THANK YOU ALL!
DreamweaverNZ
Well now BobbiJo ... It may have taken seven months to make your first posting but hey! it has been well worth it! I just love your word usage, your descriptions are ace! Love it! Looking forward to reading more of you ... You have an avid fan here! Sammy
TallPockets
I really enjoyed this work! Made me 'feel' like I was there. My best to you and yours, kind soul. Welcome! TallPockets/T.P.
Digimon
Wow! How did I miss this? Sorry I'm late, but I sure am glad I found your wonderful poem!! Yes, natures night time symphony!! I always wished we had a porch, so I could fall asleep on it, listening to the crickets chirpping! Thank you so much for dedicating this to us! You are very sweet!!! ~ Peace ~ E
Flannelman
Your words create more visual images than any of my photos, thanx ;-)
mamabobbijo
Your images are the stars of the show, but at night it's all about sound. Thanks for your kind comment!
meico
The language and descriptive passages are excellent ... but I most enjoyed the honesty and integrity of the sentiments. They are from the heart. Well done! Mike
Bothellite
What a beautiful concert between a grandmother and grandchild and the nature all around. Wonderful!
goodoleboy
A poignant literary salute to the sights and sounds of nature.
CarolSassy
Yes, I'm THERE! I chirp back at the frogs sometimes. They seem to answer back! lol q-: Nice work! (:
SusiQ
Beautiful imagery! You eased my turmoil a bit this morning with your peaceful descriptions. Thank you for allowing us to share those front row seats with you.
XoxoTree
You set an image to your wriiten words that speaks so high. Wonderrful. :)
cymbidium
You really have painted an image here with your words - a very clever wordsmith indeed!! Wish I had your talent - never was any good with words :) Lovely work - keep it up!!
TwoPynts
With is wonderful...it should be set to music. :)
Margana
This is wonderful. It has an extraordinary lyrical quality and the imagery is absolutely lovely! Thanks for telling me about this, BJ. I enjoyed reading it.- M :^)
bangonthedrums
goodness, if this is your first attempt, you have a wondrous and magical future as poet... i for one am looking forward to experiencing more!
beachzz
Oh, this is wonderful, I can hear it all and feel this night - so perfect!!