Feelin' the Pain by heartnsoul
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Description
Some days are up
Didn't think about you
Other's are down
Christ it hurts so bad
Feeling so blue, the man sang it for me
The heart has to feel the pain before it can heal
May take a month, may take a year
Sing it baby, sing it......
It takes time when the hearts been broken
May take a month, may take a year
You gotta feel the pain, before you can heal
And Lord it hurts, hurts so damn bad
Gotta feel the pain before you can heal
When I walk down that road, and he's not there
And I know now, lord, just what i gotta do....
Took all your letters, took that road too
Turned them to ashes, cause I gotta heal
Some days are up
Didn't think about you
Some days are down
Christ it hurts so bad
Gotta feel the pain
He didn't look back
Not even goodbye
So I do what I can
Put your name and your ashes
There on the graves
So I can heal
Comments (8)
NothingNess
I feel it. That pain comes through. Clearly shows someone moving through the healing process. Excellent writing.
experimental
Feels like your just ahead of me on the road
davidoblad
The pain of a broken heart is not all that different from any other pain, such as a burn. At first it really hurts and can't be ignored. Then, over time, it moves into the background and seems not to hurt so much. It's still there, just poke it a bit and it flares right back up. We seldom heal from that pain. We just absorb it, put it in the background, and move on. Sometimes, in the case of physical damage, the damage is repaired and the pain is really gone. For emotional pain, the cause of the pain may also be repaired for the pain to be truly gone. Sometimes forgiveness can repair the damage. Sometimes, only replacing the damaged part can effect a repair. Pain serves a purpose, for present and future. It helps to protect you. Seek a better path than to ignore and absorb. Anyway, very well written Michelle. I can feel the pain too. Hugs from Dave :^)
TallPockets
Lovely written work!! -- "Don't mind if I fall apart - There's more room in a broken heart" (Carly Simon - Coming Around Again). T.P.
Silkylady
Very nice writing job you have done here. Quite sorrowful and I'm wanting to reach out to help, knowing full well, that in some cases, all the help in the world will not help at all. It has to be worked out by that person alone and in their own mind. Huggs...Silkylady...
DennisReed
Been there, done that! Sadly both sides to some degree. :( We are not perfect! Time heals all things, and indeed forgivness helps! BIG HUGS!
DreamweaverNZ
'Tis a lonely road to Heartbreak Inn ... Ghostly twilight shadows shade the hopeful faces ... Of lovers ... Beautifully written Michelle ... I can feel the pain and despair ... Take evry care, FY Sammy
mamabobbijo
Oh! I want to hug you and tell you that you will see the other side! Great imagery. The words tear at the heart strings. They say pain shared is reduced. I will take the weight. I was there many years ago. So long ago that I can now look with gratitude on his betrayal, for the things it has given me. Until then the catharsis of writing is amazingly healing. Again Hugs! Thanks for sharing. BJ