Dawn is here (phase I) by xpshayan
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greetings,
This is a quick comic style sketch I was working on; here I present it in its most crude stage- very rough and edgy, even though penned.
There are some distortions visible which should be set right.
I look forward to comments and ideas. ((See Fullview))
Comments (2)
ppetersen
I still see tremendous growth in your pictures. There is more detail in the body work, from the muscles outlined to the forms in her hands. You've improved so very much. Excellent line work.
GreenSat
Nice job, Sean...it's obvious that your work is constantly improving. Fingers on her hand are fairly well done, and her eyes are looking in the same direction. I'm not sure why so many of your characters are crying, though... Her right boob is a little larger than her left but that's the worst I can say about this which in fact may be nothing at all...the same thing does occur in real life...the boobs being different sizes, that is. A note about jewelry...unless that's a tatoo on her upper left arm, arm bracelets/bands should be perpendicular to the arm as it is the resistance between the bracelet/arm band and the flesh that holds it up. A diagonal band would have a very large oval shaped apperature that would tilt and constantly be sliding down her arm. Overall you did an excellent job and I can't wait to see your next entry!!! Thanks for sharing!!!!