Casual sex- 3 poems by WiseHanna
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Three sort poems dealing with everyday issues.
Comments most welcome.
Reality Vs. Oblivion
My last drink is poured,
With it my life ebbs away.
Mists of inebriety caresses
A harsh and brutal reality.
The drink you so crave,
Is a false remedy for fools.
If oblivion is what I seek,
I'll have one more for the road.
****
Casual sex
Sex on a pillow,
No room for navigation.
Wide planes of tits and asses,
Wilting , rotting in bogs of destitution.
Sex on a pillow,
Semen stains on dirty sheets.
Slack muscles seek contentment,
Wilting, rotting in bogs of destitution.
****
Subliminal message
Sexy dress, generous d
Comments (3)
meico
Question: in Casual sex "Semen stains on dirty shits" should that be "Semen stains on dirty sheets?" [I'd certainly prefer that, but it's your poem!] It's sad that there have been 19 views and no comments - have the readers been struck dumb by the maturity of your poems? Ah well, 'twas ever thus. This is an excellent trilogy - the links between each poem are subtle but discernable. Each could easily stand alone, but are that much more effective as a group. They are all honest - even to the point of [justified] harshness. As a group they point unerringly to underside of our attitudes to sex and attraction. The picture of the failed predator in the last part is priceless, the tawdry nature of [some - there are exceptions] casual sex is exposed so well in the centre as is the sheer despair of 'the message in the bottle' in the first. Very very thought-provoking. Mike
mamabobbijo
Three very thought provoking poems. Thanks for sharing them. I like Reality vs. Oblivion the best, although as I don't drink I have no idea why. They are all well linked. They present the reader with a peek into another's life. Then they can either, recognize themselves and enjoy the mirror. Or run horrified because someone else might see them recognize themselves. BJ
TallPockets
Three most accurate, well written, slices of life!!