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Poser Comics/Cartoons posted on Oct 22, 2006
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Ok back in business again. The boys are off to Iraq when mainly because that

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jwebster45206

5:27AM | Sun, 22 October 2006

The story's getting interesting now! Glad you're back at it. I'm not sure how I feel about the new typeface, but the extra space between the lines of text does make it easier to read.

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Woormius

6:26AM | Sun, 22 October 2006

Only recently I discovered your artworks, sorry. I need to read previous pages to understand the story, so any other comment will come later :) However, really interesting style. Bravo!!!

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lh_cerdeira

8:05AM | Sun, 22 October 2006

Not sure how I feel 'bout the type face either, but it's easier to read with the extra space... And, I'm really glad you're back to business... :D So, the action is about to start, I guess... Keep it up! :D

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jenwencheng

9:14AM | Sun, 22 October 2006

Uh-oh, sounds like these two may be in for a fight (with each other?) in the future. Nice to see the story continue. Wordy is ok, especially when it sounds like action is imminent!

Erotikomix

11:24AM | Sun, 22 October 2006

very realistic dialogues; highly appropriate expressions on the men's faces. Your script has definitely caught my attention.

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goop

2:12PM | Sun, 22 October 2006

Wow... A new twist... Liking it Midnight, but you always seem to please your audience... Two thumbs way up.

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9841007

2:49PM | Sun, 22 October 2006

Well it looks like the boys are in for a rough ride. They shouldnt accepted it, because I want to watch him self-destruct too! LOL The only two things I see out of place is, one when his talking about the drop zone, I think you want at night and the last line sounded a little funny too. You should try When the rescuers went in they complained about hearing voices in their heads. Other then that its great as always.

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McAfee2000

10:26AM | Mon, 23 October 2006

Cool - love the photos in the image - great work

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midnight_stories

8:33PM | Mon, 23 October 2006

Wow you guys dont hold back I always try to do my best yes I agree there is too much text and there was a lot more, but I cut out a lot already. At the moment Im not sure how to approach it. I would have to turn out three times the amount of pages to explain things. I may have to stop the comic till I can do a better job on the story telling. Well thanks for the feed back I m not sure where Im heading at the moment so Ill get back when I get some more confidence. Midnight Stories


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