Piano Man by vaggabondd
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Description
Slowly the rain drips
On the brim of my hat
As I play our song
On the piano
In the park
In the dark
Thinking of you
Blood drips
From my finger tips
Staining the keys
With your memories
Of our first kiss
Our last kiss
And everything in between
What drives me insane
Is the pain
That comes
From me loving you
And you, not loving me
I wish you had another
I wish I was fighting a lover
But its just me
You just don
Comments (9)
vaggabondd
I think this one reads a lot better if you read it just a little fast. see what you think and let me know. I hope everyone likes it.
Valerie-Ducom
Yes I like your words my friend, you know to touch the heart with only few words and it's a lot of Art!!! Good day ;)
Sekadhar
Sweet love....always is sweet, even when is TERRIBLE!!! Ha, ha...! Love your poem!*****
mamabobbijo
I think it's tragicly sad, and touchingly beautiful! Economic but, so effective use of words! Thanks, BJ BTW was there an image, instead of that red X ? B
A2J2001
Yea, I like it. It makes you think. Those are the best ones.
gingerlou
Excellent, very touching, bravo!!
WiseHanna
Hi, You took me with your words back to my teenage days when I had a crush over an older boy who barely noticed me... I like poems that are simple and use strong words. May I draw your attention to a typo - last stanza, first line - should be WALK BY and not BYE. Thanks for sharing Hanna
kutiepiee
Excellent nice job...
Merrylee
Nice poem.