heart of a woman by NothingNess
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the heart of a woman runs deeper than the deepest ocean wild and spoiled as a child untamed and feral it is a savage beast its needs rampant its wants uninhibited it is fiercely loyal primal and territorial ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ the heart of a woman is as soft as a warm summer breeze gentle and kind as a saint gives more than receives the heart of a woman will raise you in praise and deeds even as you raze it to its knees thrice broken yet dares to love again and again it does not need to love but wants to love such is the heart of a woman
Comments (7)
DennisReed
Superb, and so honest!
Storm9167
Hm, beautiful words.. But I honestly have never met a woman like that!! And I do mean never.. Every woman I have ever known has alway's tried to cause pain.. Although I will admit in my youth I was less than perfect in that department as well.. Still you must be writing about a different woman than exists in my world..
PhrankPower
I'd say every woman has the potential to be as you've so splendidly written. But, it also takes the right man to bring her to her full potential, as well as is the reverse. If someone should mistakenly believe they've never met such a woman, then it is towards themselves they must look to find the reasons why. As usual Leah, you've zeroed in on your target with stunning success!
meico
This is the heart of a woman through a poet's eyes ... not to be confused with so-called reality. It really doesn't matter that many women never even aspire to such depth of thought and feeling. It is enough that one - you, for example - feels that way. Lovely progression here, btw, and the well-chosen words carry your meaning beautifully. Mike
Etherealmistress
Every woman can be like this poem, but as PhrankPower says it takes the right circumstances around her to bring forth these many and varied states of the heart. It is really no wonder that men are sometimes so confused by us...I know that sometimes my changing emotions and moods confuse even me. But I hope that I am even a fraction of the woman you describe in this great piece, in the eyes of my partner...;-)
busi2ness
Good to see you unintentionally created some debate, the words however, still true.
Chaosphoto
You have some amazing words, as a man I have to say I may never be capable of understanding a woman but I am truly blessed by the one who chose me.