Little World by WhispersSoft

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Dec 13, 2006

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Little World Here I am in my own little world My Thoughts locked away from others The dreams of better times held close While darkness trying hard to close in Here I am in my own little world Battles I wage no one sees All alone when others are near Sorrow fills my waking hours Death and destruction rules my sleep Here I am in my own little world Struggling to breath and smile Hoping the light will shine soon Pushing away the desire to die Here in my own little world My depression seeming to grow Happy ending no where in sight Solitude becoming my friend Here I am in my own little world By Dee AKA WhispersSoft 12/12/06 Thank you so much for the friendship and comments. Sometimes life doesn't always let us come here to look and share. And yes some times life gets rough and we work to much. We may even get a little down and feel alone, well this is my way of showing your not alone. To all my friends, sorry I haven't been around to comment on your wonderful art. Between work and being sick it hasn't left me much time for art and my friends, but know that I miss you and long to glance at the journey you share :) Picture is from the net, I don't claim it as my own. I did add text and the framing.

Comments (10)

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Gor111

4:03AM | Wed, 13 December 2006

A wonderful poem, really! I'm so sorry that you did not feel well! Take care, Dee!

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CarolSassy

5:15AM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Sorry to hear you were sick! Hope you're better!! Fantastic/sad poem! (:

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pops

6:05AM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Awesome but sad poemHope you are feeling better, it's lonesome without you

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meico

6:18AM | Wed, 13 December 2006

I think sometimes we need this time in our 'little worlds' ... we need to take the time to cherish ourselves, and where necessary feel sorry for ourselves. There will come a time when we feel the need to look outside ourselves, when introspection becomes a trap: INTROSPECTION Introspections curse: a carnival hall of mirrors with no exit sign. Well, my dear Dee, this is a well-written, if sad, description of the lonely times. I do hope that they don't persist too long. Mike

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Skydancer917

8:10AM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Very nicely written!!!

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sixstring

12:41PM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Don't feel bad, Dee. This is a very well written piece, and I'm just glad I got to read it at all. I hope you start feeling feeling better ASAP! Thank you for sharing this. Big hugs. - Matt

wishes3d

1:20PM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Wonderful! My best to you!

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mamabobbijo

3:30PM | Wed, 13 December 2006

Sorry you've been unwell! Sending healing thoughts your way! I hope the light is always there for you! Just a tiny glimmer can grow just by turning your head to look at it. My Dad used to say you will never find the time it always slips past you, you must make the time! Be Well. BJ

falleneagletear

4:15PM | Thu, 14 December 2006

Osio Dee, very well written poem and love the art as well. Please be well take care of your self and hopefully I will see you here agin soon missed you and your art while you were away.I will hold you in my thoughts prayers and dreams I have made a prayer tie for you and yours hope the Great Spirit answers it soon! Your eternal friend, falleneagletear S.W.A.K!!!!!!!!! p:

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