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Enchantress

Writers Gothic posted on Dec 21, 2006
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Love, moonshine, silence, child The enchantment has begun Dark pleats flowing in the wind Thus the moment came. The witch alone, in savage beauty Casts the words and casts the runes A face she seeks, a name, a voice The man she wants from far away. Love, moonshine, silence, will Her words are strong, her eyes on fire Heart pounding wildly in her chest Undaunted love stirs in unrest. Voices whisper soft and low Voices murmur here and far And he, tormented by their witchcraft Is coming home. But roads are long and filled with peril He fends off all, he reaches out For her, the dark, bewitching woman For her, that calls to him. The fiend is here, the fiend is near She feels him, shrieks, to warn, in fear But it's too late, she knows and feels The cold blade through his heart. Alone, he dies in a ravine His chest with wam blood overflowing She's fallen, the last breath she takes And no more crying now she makes

Comments (3)


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DennisReed

12:43AM | Fri, 22 December 2006

Superb tale!

Wolfspirit

3:28PM | Sun, 24 December 2006

Interesting, the writing seemed to flow well, read it with ease, no stumbling, although not sure what I think entirely of it quite yet, thoughts are still processing, and thank you for sharing.

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drace68

2:22AM | Tue, 26 December 2006

Excellent. Powerful, stark words used in a hynoptic cadence; this works. You showed us the elements of this story and let us draw our own conclusions. Great writing, even if Gothic is far from my favorite genre. Dick


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