Into The Subway by jarm
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Description
I felt my heart miss a beat as my foot stepped onto the dull platform of 122nd Street Subway. It was chilling, the smokey fog from the street below was hung in the air like mist on a winter's day. I couldn't see him, but he was here somewhere, the train was waiting on the platform, I couldn't see him in the carriage either. I felt the cold grip of my gun in my hand, my only advantage, it was enough.
Silence, I seemed to stand there forever, like a toy figure in a street play, one of the background characters.
He was still here...I could feel him.
Comments (2)
foleypro
Excellent love the scene and the Narration
Moebius87
Nice one... small comment about the blocking, a bit too close to the stairs (unless she's backing up).