If I Had One Wish by vaggabondd

Writers • Romance • posted on Jan 05, 2007

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I hate it when I wake up Life begins Shower and a shave Then on my way Eight hours of people I can hardly stand Back home It

Comments (8)

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hipps13

4:41PM | Fri, 05 January 2007

nice...I like it

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kutiepiee

4:48PM | Fri, 05 January 2007

If I had one wish it would be that I had someone that romantic in my life. lol very nice. :)

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Sekadhar

5:45AM | Sat, 06 January 2007

Super poem...and I have one wish, only one...

Valerie-Ducom

8:41AM | Sat, 06 January 2007

Very beautiful beautiful words and very nice feeling!!! :)

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Undertaker

9:58AM | Sat, 06 January 2007

Good work.

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A2J2001

1:24AM | Sun, 07 January 2007

I agree with kutiepiee. What I would give to have someone half as romantic.

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Doom Dancer

10:36AM | Tue, 09 January 2007

This poem is great, made me choke up a bit. I have one I have been working on that is similar to this called "If I Die Before I Wake." Very good work.

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Zeldie

7:14AM | Fri, 02 February 2007

You are a great poet, Mr. Vaggabondd. Even more, you have a great heart and a sensitive soul... She's lucky to have you, this woman of your dreams ;0)