Hey, My name is Jessika, I kinda used to hate photography but I grew to love it as I grew older
when I take photos, of anything really, I take photos I find beauty in, photos can be of someone, smiling, that once-in-a-lifetime smile, a scene of countryside that in a way can only be seen once, should you look away you could miss it, that is how I see life.
I am now 16, I have an odd slightly troubled life, but I have a family that loves me, and friends who I could not live without.
I am one of them girls who has no idea what she wants in life, I am going through college, aimlessly not really knowing what I want, Photography perhaps, no, I don't want to turn it into a job, it loses the freedom and beauty, web design? No, not that either I kinda am lazy, so that for a job was a no...
so I wander aimlessly, getting an education, making friends, and working as hard as I can, I don't drink I don't smoke, and I don't do drugs, nor do I swear...much, so I am a good girl =) and hopefully will do well in life,
I would love to be a writer, and I love comments and ratings on all my work, I would love to improve at what I do
Thanks for reading a very vague uninteresting story of me, I hope my photos and art is more appealing :)
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Comments (6)
paradigm
The second image does enhance her beauty.
kuerbote
Good one. Maybe a little too much sharpening IMHO. I think if you apply gaussian blur or lens blur to the background to simulate DOF it'll look better, as the actual background distracts from the model.
mollymaye
I agree about the background. It is distracting. Maybe crop it vertically and blur the background a bit. Also, I might burn it just a little in the background to make her pop out. I think it is just a bit too sharp. She definatly has flawless skin in the 2nd image.
PhrankPower
Nice face, but why brighten and sharpen the background? Or the shirt and hand for that matter. Those areas could have been left like they were. The sharpening is a bit much. If it were mine, I'd place her re-worked body by itself over the original image, and then set that layer it in at only about 60 or 70%. That way you'd still get the benefit of your face work, but not so extreme. The rest of the shot could remain as is allowing her to stand out.
jocko500
yes you could have just her brighten up and the background done as the others say. What the other say is true. Hope this will help
Zacko
I think you did really good. Her face looks great in your postworked version. Im not that sure blurring out the background as everyone suggests would be such a good idea. First of all it would be completely unrealistic..unless you blurred out the couch as well and how weird wouldnt that look. No i think you should be happy with what youve got there. A terricif snapshot for your photo album. But if you ever were to wanna give it a more interesting background and turn it into something a bit more artistic i suggest you paint in some kind of brighter background instead of blurring out the present one. You did great, keep up the good job. #:o)