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SEE-SAW

Writers People posted on Jan 17, 2007
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SEE-SAW See-saw twinned, counterbalanced you and I. So high you take me. So deep within you rocking, rocking. See-saw 'twixt then and when flits fleeting now we reach, touch; grasp, clutch fingers locked but slipping, slipping. See-saw the very word[s] tell[s] the tale: a vision is a mere hyphen away from a memory passing, passing.

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eternalwytch1

6:01AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

BalWhat a sweet image and the voice behind the words...very profound.

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NekhbetSun

6:07AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

Bittersweet and touching...well done Mike S Hugs Photobucket - Video and Image Hosting

Valerie-Ducom

6:28AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

So nive work and as always, some very beautiful words form you !!! Bisous et bonne journ :)

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helanker

8:22AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

Yes, that is indeed sweet work. Both in the image, but also in your words.

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romanceworks

9:55AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

My memories on the see-saw are but a mere hyphen away. Seems wth the passage of time there are many precious things we must say goodbye to. Poignant writing. CC

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MaBouje

11:17AM | Wed, 17 January 2007

'...passing,passing...' but still with you yes the play on the hypenated word expanding out staying with it spiritually ascending/descending the lines transcend from Now to Then (all this, at once - like Mind)

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mamabobbijo

4:14PM | Wed, 17 January 2007

I'll never look at see-saws in quite the same way! Each verse seemed to rock up and down in cadence with the see-saw. the balance between childhood and adulthood is very interesting. A well crafted image to mgo along. Thanks BJ

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miashadows

4:20PM | Wed, 17 January 2007

YOUR WORDS RUN DEEP ,YOUR IMAGE ALMOST AS A FADED,DISTANT MEMORY.IT`S SAD-EXELLENT WORK

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tallpindo

5:31AM | Thu, 18 January 2007

Like my sister cannot look at chocolate without saying "Mocha." She is the inventor of Starbucks. It happened on a teeter totter long ago before the rotting posts see-sawed.

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Bothellite

10:22PM | Thu, 18 January 2007

The last three lines.. classic. Great reflections for my dull head.

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avalonfaayre

4:46PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Sensual and elusive. See, Saw, Been there done that...lol.


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