Transform by kaliwright
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Description
He Plunges into death, the dark of his years
Transform,transform is the only word he hears,
From unknown voices inside his head,
Are they the echo's of th longlost dead?
Invading his senses at every turn
Transform they say, transform and learn
Traverse the underworld , the realm of death
That touches all with it's icy breath
Transform from what you have become
To be born again , a rising sun...
Comments (3)
Dinhi
Beautiful and rich in motivational content [=
MeredithWilson
Dear Kali, That's very beautiful. I think we all dream of a Phoenix rebirth after a life of countless transformations. It seems that we re-invent ourselves on a daily basis, but never quite reach that total rebirth!!! Very moving and very well crafted!! It flows beautifully as poetry should - because poetry is not meant for paper, but for voice!!!! Excellebnt work!!!! Love ya!!! Meredith
meico
This reads like a hymn to the Midwinter Solstice and the cycle of re-birth. It is well constructed and has an appropriately ceremonial rhythm. Excellent. I hope to read more of your work. Mike