Bored by jakiblue

DAZ|Studio • Work In Progress • posted on Jan 19, 2007

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This one is a work in progress. I can see a couple of things that need fixing (robot's not completely sitting on the container [grrr don't you hate it when you don't notice things like that until AFTER the 1 hour 15 minute render], and Aiko's got a weird bend happening in her thigh [scratch head]). I'm not sure if I like the two together of if I should just go with the robot on his own - both images say something to me. Anyhow, hope you enjoy it and can give me some constructive criticism on it. (original file size too large to upload so had to reduce it - hopefully it didn't lose anything) Backstreets by Stonemason (I worship the man!) @ DAZ ToonBot by Tate @ DAZ using Light Dome Pro by Dreamlight @ DAZ (OMG they are magnificent!!)

Comments (29)

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Niha

7:04AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I think it is still very cute! I love her expression of boredom! Very nice!

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lethalliam

7:12AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Awesome scene.

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rimer

7:13AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I also think its cute. Very nice scene. Well Done!!

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vice

7:14AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

wow daz looks good

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cruzin

7:34AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Damn, this is so good, it really is superb. I give it a 20 (I know you unchecked the box but it deserves every star!)

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Naoo

7:40AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Cooooool

newangels

8:00AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I really like them together, I find I get some funny leg bends with Aiko to sometimes apart from the things you mentioned I dont see anything else that you could fix and that background is perfect :) Angela

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TheBryster

8:10AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I'd makethe robot smaller, like he's a large pet or younger sibling. Apart from that, don't change a thing! It's a very interesting work and very well done.

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Styxx

8:18AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I really like this.. I'd also keep em both! It really looks they are friends.. and makes a statement.. Bravo!

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akulla

8:24AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

This is some quality stuff, nice to see the lighting engine in D|S getting better, cant wait to see the finished product. BZ

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ashokscape

11:40AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Incredible lighting and the whole work is very professional! Your best till date, if you don't mind me saying so!

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kierab

11:50AM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Nice. There is something about the scale that is bugging me though. It seems like the container is too small or they are too big. Generally those containers are the size of a truck trailer, which would make the characters about 12 feet tall to look like that. Is it just me?

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carlx

1:13PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Great and creative idea!!! Fantastic composition and view!!! Bravo!!!

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marco.dd

1:21PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Great work, very beautiful lightning, pose and expression

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maye_faire

1:53PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I think it's great having the two of them together! The lighting is fantastic, and the facial expressions are so cute!

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Rutra

2:37PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

I like the two of them together, it's a nice contrast. The girl has a determined look in her face, the robot has a passive face, as if just waiting (in boredom) for the next whim of his girlfriend, whatever that may be. The light is fantastic. There seems to be something wrong with the scale of the container or the characters, as Kierab already mentioned.

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Whatthe

5:22PM | Fri, 19 January 2007

Awwww, what a sweet image! Great job all around!

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Dreamful

6:37AM | Sat, 20 January 2007

Fantastic work , very well done!! Splendid, pose, character and lighting!!

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cymbidium

12:24PM | Sat, 20 January 2007

I like them both together, their expressions are excellent and the lighting is wonderful - Stonemason's Backstreets really looks like a photo!! I wouldn't change anything, except for fixing the things you already mentioned :) (Meant to get Light Dome Pro when it was on sale, but missed it, darn - looks like I'll have to get it though, if this is an example of what it can do!!)

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GARNETROSE

3:27PM | Sat, 20 January 2007

wow!! Looks like a photo :)

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shanpoo

9:14PM | Sat, 20 January 2007

I tried to see if you missed any details to correct for you but you covered them. I love the Light Dome Pro as well. I really think all Daz Studio artists should have it. Love the details in this one. I want that Backstreets so badly....Shannon ;}

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sazzyazzca

11:26PM | Sat, 20 January 2007

Yup, I hate when that happens too. LOL I like the two of them together. They look like they are contemplating their next scheme. :)

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leehilliard

3:22PM | Sun, 21 January 2007

ditto. they look great together. reminds me of a summer day as a kid growing up.other than fixing the things you mentioned it is grade A, imho.

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dreamlight

5:04AM | Mon, 22 January 2007

HOLY S%#&T!!!!! LOL Really nice DS render! Love those cute characters!!! Nice WIP!! Heres some suggestions: The skybackground behind the fence looks a bit too empty. Like the sky is too low. Maybe adding a building at a distance, would fix that. Also, i would suggest using the LDP EX version here, to get those wonderful sun shadows. I even would amp up the sun a lot - to give more punch in the image (and a cool backlight). Keep up the awesome work my friend!!! /Walle

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