Two Is Better by hipps13
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Description
Special place
Gets us thru
All times
Hearts Grow
Fires Burn
Souls unite
Dreams become realities
Lust turns to passion
No misunderstanding
Maybe all we need
Freedom
Becomes real
Our hearts
Our souls
Sun shine
Speak
What
Comments (6)
B_PEACOCK
I have to agree Linda. 2 is better than one. BEautiful thoughts and very well put love .Hope your having a beautiful day
meico
One of those ocurrences where the whole is greater than the sum of the parts .. though it's a matter of great good fortune [or careful choice of partner] when this happens. The shape of the poem is good: it cascades smoothly through the development of the relationship. A very good read. Mike
vaggabondd
Its the ride together that makes it all worth while and it sounds to me like you understand to enjoy the ride while you can. Nice Work
ARTWITHIN
Beautiful expression of love. I associate a feeling with the movement, the flow of your poem. It is like being in a rubber raft, in the arms of one's lover, drifting on a soft current of a river in the sunlight of a clear day. See what your beautiful words do to me? I'm such a romantic. Hugs, Linda! x:)
D.C.Monteny
Niiiice!!! A beautiful poem! Two is better than one, 'xept when they try to kill each other slowly with every new conversation. Think we might sooner find the holy grail, than discover the secrets of love ;-)
NothingNess
Beautiful! Reminds me of something of someone I know.