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A Frail Climax

Writers Still Life posted on Jan 25, 2007
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our masculinity a handkerchief small denied with high pitched voices nothing so terrifying as fear for imaginary fear what should we look for a frail climax uncontrolled panting and a useless fusion of sweat decadent we are only in our dreams our actions respectable no imagination as regular as the periods of a virgin +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you so much for reading my poems I hope all you macho bears out there are not too offended ;-)) Have a GREAT thursday Dirk

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JohnDelaquiox

1:37AM | Thu, 25 January 2007

as regular as the periods of a virgin that is kewl

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RodolfoCiminelli

4:40AM | Thu, 25 January 2007

Excellent expression Dirk.....!!!

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jo_dis

8:43AM | Fri, 26 January 2007

Dirk ... I was struck by the muscular tension in your use of free verse ... rhythms and sensibilities I've yet to master. One of the pleasures of visiting Renderodity's Writers Gallery is encountering artists with real passions and professional styles.

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meico

7:24AM | Sat, 27 January 2007

I can only echo jo_dis. This is defitely writing of some power and import. Mike


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