This Life by D.C.Monteny

Writers • Atmosphere/Mood • posted on Jan 30, 2007

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this life unsuited for words for time for numbers you can't freeze the movement of this life countless photographs registrated by the one who can't see himself in this life fingers crawling on a keyboard filled with signs which we see but never ever understand this life your life my life if only we could sleep this life away +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Thank you so much for reading this poem Dirk

Comments (5)

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CarolSassy

6:40AM | Tue, 30 January 2007

STEP AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER!! Take a walk at the beach! Sounds like you've been hanging around the monitor too long! lol q-: Lovely words, but no, I don't wanna sleep my life away. Very lovely image! (:

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Doom Dancer

6:45AM | Tue, 30 January 2007

I am with you on wanting to "sleep life away" Dirk...for me I have this strange wish to fall asleep, dream of my wife and the way we were, and die so I could stay there. It never happens. Guess we have to find another avenue my friend...I started doing art again. Maybe you can find something to use as a distraction. Hang in there man. -Rob

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meico

8:41AM | Tue, 30 January 2007

This is, I think, a danger in introspection. Some time ago I wrote this short poem: INTROSPECTION Introspections curse: a carnival hall of mirrors with no exit sign. Now, when life oppresses me, I force myself to look out - anywhere but inside among my moody blues masquerading as philosophy. Your poem expresses this feeling with power and finesse. Good writing indeed. Mike

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