it is hard to work out which is the reworked image, they both have flaws in my eye - one is the over-white and thus distracting glove and the background showing what looks like the shadow of the back of the chair and in the other the face is too dark and thus attention is drawn elsewhere. Either way you know which part of the retouched image i am uncertain of in terms of postwork. As for the photo itself, a nice pose showing the cold such a jacket warrants yet i cant help but think the fill light to the right is too bright. I'm just saying what i see as you asked for critical comments, i hope that helps :)