Jungle Battle (please critique) by bloodomen13
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Description
My first ever piece of work with a 3D program. Used Poser/Bryce 4 and a bit of Photoshop 5.5. I'm not please with how it turned out, but would like critiques. Utimate Bow and Arrow are courtesy of Bushi's site.
Comments (4)
Reaper
Your work with Poser is very good for a first time. However, I would advise to look around for some free textures or use the texture templates to make your own. With regards to your work with Bryce my advice to you would be check out the bryce section of this web site, see want other artists do with Bryce ask question of them where possible and in time you will be better at it. For some people it takes time to get use to working in 3D. For first work it is good in time and with practise the cardboard tree will look more real
Dnick
I have to give you a 9 for your Poser work alone..geez first one... I'll give you a 6 for Bryce but hell we are all learning here..thanks for joining us..look forwaed to your work...:)
Archanejill
it's nice.. but some of the jungle looks a bit like cardboard. I don't know what to tell you about remedying that. But for a first piece of work, it's very good. My first was a plant and a sphere and a cube in the sea. So you're ahead of me at least ;) nice job. But i'm going to make you work for the higher marks, haha.
Antoonio
Like my sweet monster, Archanejill said, something is wrong with the jungle. Try adding pic of jungle, or adding trees so much to backround, that horizon does not show. And, green part of the pic in foreground is little too big. But hey, for first effort, this is really good stuff. Keep working. :o)