I like your picture, but I don't understand the green around the moon. I think also I would have left out the trees down by the water. Understand that this is only my opinion, and that doesn't necessarily make it right.

I agree with garybina. I also wonder little that sky you have chosen.. some more realistic looking would look perhaps better? An easy way to create nice mountain shapes is: go to mountain editor, choose some fractal preset and hit the button next to it to achieve nice shape.. then press gaussian edges and you're done:) I think you have nice start here for your Bryce career:) Just keep practising, asking advices and reading some tutorials:)

Good for you! I hope you like working with Bryce. This scene is okay for a first, it looks like you've used the resource objects and textures with some nice, simple terrains. Rather than creating the moon in front of the clouds (with the weird green... thing... around it) I would use the Sky Lab and opt to have a visible moon and try to engineer the clouds around it. I created a tutorial for Bryce beginners that can be found at http://www.renderosity.com/mod/tutorial/index.php?tutorial_id=1123 I highly recommend (duh) that will teach you more if you're interested in learning. If not, you still have a program that will provide you and your friends a little artistic entertainment whenever you like.

Wowwww, so beautiful work and excellent composition and color :)

nice start!!! some more info and downloads in this link. http://forum.daz3d.com/viewtopic.php?t=43591