A Lovely Shoot - Redo by lavcea
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Taking all suggestions under advisement, this is the postwork image.
-L
Comments (8)
shanpoo
DL greetings: I think you did just fine with the postwork! I dont see the seam on her neck anymore and only see just a couple of slightly noticable blurriness. Excellent!! The only other suggestion that I would make is getting better skin textures. If your using V3 a few of some good freebie textures are mari_e-17 & Vali! For men dont have a clue. When you have used DS and Photoshop for awhile I will let you know about a tutorial that has really helped my images. For now the best is to stick to basics and start building more and more on difficulty. If you need anything just email me or IM I will be here for you!......Shannon ;} have a good weekend!
fullquiver
DL Greetings, Much better. Good job fixing it up. You will do fine with your new hobby (addiction). Steve
blindsay
A lovely romantic image. The body language is very good. She looks like she's looking into his eyes, but his eyes seem focused elsewhere (ahh - typical guy, right?). Maybe that was your intent? Else it might be good to move his eyes so they're focused on the eyes of his newfound love. Just a suggestion. I like the image. With Poser its often difficult (I find) to see exactly where a characters eyes are pointing...
MKeyes
DL greetings.. Great fix! For the eyes, in D/S there is a "Point at..." function. You can make your subjects eyes point at whatever you want. For instance, at the main camera, OR at each others faces - OR - each others eyes. That way, you're sure to get the eyes right on. Then all you need to do, is adjust the head a bit to make it look natural. Give it a try. Play with the Point at... you'll discover that to be a wonderful little devise for precision. Thumbs up dear!
mcyak72
DL_greetings Great job. like the change. awesome work...
jedi_killer05
His texture is not that great ,hers is fine,good work so far.
mhossack
DL Greetings Nice image, the postwork has made a big difference.
gandalf_1
DLG. Great repair job on the seams!! Keep it up. Shanpoo is right.. there are some really great textures out there you can get for free, lots of em here on Renderosity. DAZ has a great item (cheap) called International Beauties. ***Another tip for darkening the skin texture of caucasion models: In the Surfaces Tool, choose a body part such as "Skin Torso". Now, double-click on the "Color/Diffuse" color (it's usually some shade of pink). This will open the Windows color picker, with your current color showing. Simply move the slider bar on the right down a little, until you see a shade more like what you want the skin to be. Save that color as a custom color, click ok, and then apply that color to all of the skin surfaces. Just remember the copy/paste and it'll go fast. If it comes out too dark, lighten the "Highlight/Specular" some to give it a little bit of a glow. Hope this helps.