Let Downs by hipps13
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Still Love To Swim
Saved a lifeguard once to pass a class
Struggling and a fighting he was
Tried to drown me but I held on
Brought him in, he was surprised
Turned his shoulder and said,
Comments (5)
meico
A well-written cautionary tale of expectations and disappointments. I'm glad you still love the water - I wish I did! Mike
B_PEACOCK
Sucks that you go thru something like that not to pass. But that is life isnt it.
ARTWITHIN
Wonderful poem of a let down, but also with an ending that shows one is not defeated. I think the let down give us the opportunity to grow in strength, they strengthen our will, if we let them. Hugs, x:)
vaggabondd
let downs either build charter or we let them tare us down. I am glad u still love the water. nice work
Thelby
Let down by the expectation of being good enough to pass in someone elses eyes only to find out, ........ you will never be good enough ion their eyes. It is the same when someone says: "Respect is Earned Not Given", translation: "You will never gain my respect"!!!! Sad but true, but it is the trials of life that build the character, because sheltering only produces loneliness! Top Notch work here :^)