very nice, i like the expression on the face, and the excellent use of color, very artsy.

If the symbolism of the "red things on the tree are going to go" is the fruit of knowledge, could tie in with the expression of your seated character - as well as the red of the clothing / shoes... And like the "morose" sentiment the image is portraying... my interpretation to this point of the wip - is knowledge, or the lack of... and how that can affect one... not always is ignorance bliss, or the wrong knowledge, also brings it's own pain... Just some thoughts. Success to you, hewsan

Your work is very original and deep!

Vudi, some news about your damage LOL You shouldnt be so hard to yourself! You have a great talent to create magic moods with an touch of innocence. Dont struggle too much with the apples, they are just wonderful, you also should not worry about the trees, there is depth and enough realsim and absolutly enough light/shadow to recognize all these wonderful little details! Dont give up on drawing the things in YOUR way! I guess you struggle around all the time with these little details to make them better! I know this very good as a lot of other people here too, but you should better trust yourself more! There is no damage to see, this is wonderful! Happy days Vudi, hope to see any news later, but I am out for some time now, have to travel for the job :(

Really nicely selected additional colour, that pale green is perfect. I think this is going just to the right direction - and I agree everything that Martin said above! I don't think you need there much more than a little toning to that grey. The composition is great; the atmosphere is deep and light at the same time - I really like it! It has depth as well visually as emotionally. Well dne, VuDi!