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GATES OF GRASS

Writers Romance posted on Feb 27, 2007
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First love - eternally bittersweet GATES OF GRASS Through gates of grass Frail daybreak glides: The gate's edge laced by prismic beads of dew Reflects the palest gold and turquoise sky And gilds her sleep-swept hair. Our sea-scented lovers' bed of ferns Groans softly as she stirs. In my arms, gently held, Smelling of new-baked bread, Myfanwy lies So close. Through gates of grass The noon sun strides: Wipes with warm hands our pool-pearled thighs And sifts the tangled webs of knotted hair Paints a leafy awning neon bright And stiffens the stems of our ferny screen On passion plays performed. In my arms, soft and still, With musk-rich scent of after love, Myfanwy lies Entwined. Through gates of grass Twilight trails the dusk: To douse the fiery skies of sunset Fading fast to indigo and profound purple. Shadows drift by like darkling snow, Leach the fullsome forest greens And silhouette the brittle bracken stands. In my mind's arms, ethereal, With poignant perfume memory-made, Myfanwy lies Elsewhere

Comments (18)


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auntietk

8:41AM | Tue, 27 February 2007

You have such a light touch, such a tender way with words. This is beautiful.

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Skydancer917

9:23AM | Tue, 27 February 2007

Ahhh, beautiful!!

Valerie-Ducom

11:18AM | Tue, 27 February 2007

Veru tenderness and lovely porm mon ami !!! Excellent !!! Bisous et bonne journ :)

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miashadows

12:40PM | Tue, 27 February 2007

A very captivating Poem,soft beautiful words.The pitcure also captures the mood perfectly-wonderful work as always

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romanceworks

12:51PM | Tue, 27 February 2007

Intimately romantic and such a gorgeous graphic. Very beautiful work.:o) CC

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RodolfoCiminelli

1:26PM | Tue, 27 February 2007

Excellent and very beautiful realization my friend.....!!!!

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helanker

1:44PM | Tue, 27 February 2007

Sigh! You really know how to write the most lovely poems, mike. WOOOW! And it is such a beautiful image too.

vlaaitje

3:37PM | Tue, 27 February 2007

wonderful words, love the creation as well

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tallpindo

5:43AM | Wed, 28 February 2007

An untamed future presented in the hours of one day.

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mamabobbijo

10:07AM | Wed, 28 February 2007

Sigh! To be remembered thus! I wonder when she thinks of you, if she sighs aloud? Amazing tribute to first love! BJ

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MaBouje

3:36PM | Wed, 28 February 2007

...but still close with you - it seems Scenes with much depth Detail Your words paint

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TallPockets

7:28PM | Wed, 28 February 2007

So THAT'S what a REAL 'writer' writes like!! (Superb!!!) My best to you and yours, my friend. T.P.

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Bothellite

9:09PM | Wed, 28 February 2007

Whew.. you can make an old man breath hard. And you do it so effortlessly.

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NothingNess

12:40PM | Sat, 03 March 2007

So sweet and tender. Seemed like magic was in the air back then.

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amirapsp

3:39PM | Sat, 03 March 2007

Awesome Artwork!!!

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hanevi

12:51AM | Tue, 06 March 2007

Very, very poignant and beautiful.

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bangonthedrums

7:16AM | Fri, 14 March 2008

masterful word-painting, michael... a friend clued me in to your work, and now i know why (and am glad for it!) michael (aka bangonthedrums)

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leanndra

6:23PM | Tue, 08 April 2008

How beautiful this is!


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