Attic (repost) by jr221
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Basically, I found some objects that I thought were appeopeiate to the scene at 3D Cafe, and added them in. I also made some slight changes to some textures. I don't like it because it is too much like my last post. Finally, I didn't want to add boxes, because I thought they ruined the feeling of age.
Thank you, everyone who commente on my last image, and to any who might comment on this one.
John
Comments (3)
seraph135
I like this post better than the last one. I still think you should crop the image differently though. My eye is just keeps going back to the table and chairs. I think there is far more interest back there. If you want to keep the same view you currently have then you should add something of interest in the lower right corner that has a similar level of contrast as the light from the windows so that your eye is drawn in a circular motion arcross the whole image. Right now I think that the composition is too unbalanced. This image has a lot of potential so don't give up.
Rinus
Like it..looks good, only thing i can say is the light from the left window... try to make it wider at the top and smaller at the bottom, and maybe cast is in the same direction as the planks on the floor, bacause the light makes the image look "silly" , takes out the realism for 50%, cause the rest is good.. thx for listening
QuasiMode
Nice attic, but you could have used more objects, to keep more space occupied. Still very nice