New Floor for Arend :) by helanker
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Hello !
As Arend (Fractelaar)said, the floor was not the best. And he was right.:)))
Now I have tried to make it better. Perhaps it is still not the best. I tried to make the wall to the left at a slant. That didnt work because it disturbed the balance of the image. But I believe it is atleast a little better now. :)))) What do you say Arend ?
Thanks for visiting and for your nice comments to my last upload. :)))
Have a lovely day.
Here the weather is Wonderful. YAY !
Comments (16)
lior
So wonderful render,My Friend!
DINGOH
Beatiful work Helle
didda
Wonderful work Helle :O))
auntietk
Beautiful! I am in awe of your ability to draw! Drawing is NOT one of my natural talents!! Excellent improvements. (If you want to keep tweaking, maybe you could add a couple of lines in the vase to show the reflection of your new, beautiful floor. But maybe not, too!)
nikolais
moody and creatively balanced
helanker
HAHA! As if I had thought about that. DOH ! But ofcause you are right and now I regret that I made a wooden floor too, because the vase is made after a drawing in a book, so I cant add stripes, without doing it wrong. And if I remove the stripes, im back where I started with a NOT very good render of a floor, where the perspective was not very convincing. Next time I will only draw the vase, so I wont get in conflict with any background GGGGG. Thanks for your nice comments. It is allways good to get constructive critics. and I am sure I wont make that mistake again ..........I hope::)))
MrsLubner
This is so good! I love the deep reflections and perspective on the vase. The floor looks good as well. Just wonderful work!
shahlaa
It's beautiful...just like the weather here, spring is here, yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
busi2ness
Very creative and talented! I will not even dare, bravo my friend.
Valerie-Ducom
Oh yes, very beautiful and excellent composition and I like this drawing of reflection !!! :)
akulla
This is a great drawing, really love the shadows and highlites.
DennisReed
I did not notice the problem as I was drawn to the reflection as intended! ;)
Fractelaar
This much and much better and realistic Helle sorry for my late reaction has not looking again 5+++ :-))
EnaR
Very beautiful ;o)))))))))))))
renderix
keep them coming!
anahata.c
helle, how did I miss these? Your pencil work has just the right combination of intensity and lightness of touch. This is intense, esp the vase: But you pull back too & let the pencil be gentle. It's amazing the sheen you get with these pencil lines, and the fact that you use just one thickness. The intensity along the top half of the vase is beautiful, as is the opening. (The shading along the left side is so true to the way shade plays off a bottle opening.) You even have gradations in the darker parts, always working the pencil in different pressures & line combinations. I don't know what the previous version looked like, but this is beautiful. I mean it when I say I'm going to learn from these. This is a beautiful example of your pencil art. My god.