Railroad to Nowhere by kawecki
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Comments (10)
BAR-CODE
Im not sure you want us to comment.. you did not type anything yourself.. i like the idea your going for..but when you can work around the straight lines the whole image connects.. the hard line's break up the parts .. but if thats the thing your going for it worked.. maybe next time give some info about the image otherwise its a bit useless ;}
mikeerson
What happens at 3:42??? Is that when a train is a coming? I have to agree with bar-code... What art you thinking???
kalon
This is stress, is it not? I seem to get that feeling from the elements used but her pose doesn't really convey it for me. Her expression is one of dismay, but her body language doesn't really seem to be interacting with the environment.
kawecki
My critics. The background is formed by three squares. I didn't liked the transition from the upper square, is too sharp and a straight line, I din't found a solution. The small green square is visible. First I tried using the texture with transparency, but it looked much better without it and in my monitor the square was not visible! I could have used only a background square with a composed texture, but my intention wasn't to paint a background in Photoshop.
zollster
hmm.....a bit of shadow under her foot so it looks like shes stood on the railroad, i'm not keen on her expression- theres no "ummph!" to it. and imo the fire background shoudl be moved up so its more in line with where the railroad trails off and blurred a bit at the bottom of it to make a smoother transition to the black part of the image. and if you're wanting to suggest distance i would blur the raliroad at the back of the pic so its out of focus
morghana
Original and very creative work! It seems the representation of a dream! Fantastic!!!
drifterlee
I see an attempt at a Salvadore Dali - but the clock is not melting!
kawecki
I thought about the clock, but I haven't anyone melting.
dphoadley
Critique Group I think that everybody has said about all that needs to be said, so i'll only add that I think that this is a very good piece of work, and speaks loudly of your talent. DO keep sharing it with us. DPH
Ondoval
Freddy must be very close to her :p I like the idea and the pic.