Am I the First? by LaVonne
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Wow! I really like what I see of Miki 2.0 so far! I am biased though because I am a huge fan of the original Miki, so I knew I would love the new one!
I am working on a character/texture for her! :)
Comments (22)
oiram
looks great bravo...top
PsychoNaut
Heh heh, YAAAAY! Lovely all 'round, what a pair of eyes. I like what I see too.
MariaAJMD
Oh, love her eyes, she's gorgeous! Hugs Maria
altec101
Ohyes looks good... Great artwork!
AlteredKitty
Fantastic portrait, excellent lighting and expression :) ___ali x
pjz99
Looks very good so far :) I'd tone down the bump strength on the teeth a bit though.
wishes3d
She looks gorgeous! Excellent portrait!!
Mondwin
She looks really a very cool girl..bravissima!V:DDD.Hugsxx
AdamWright
She looks fantastic! Beautiful work, LaVonne!
Draftshop
Excellent work!
kuerbote
She's looking great. Good work.
AnAardvark
Critique club comment -- It really looks great. I particularly like, from a technical POV, that you have gotten rid of nostril glow. The only criticism I have is that the eyes look a bit too "glass-like", the whites just don't have enough detail.
Indoda
A very lovely portrait of the new Miki - great POV. I'll go with piz99 on the teeth and with AnAardvark on the eyes. Mat room may be helpful to add a little blue to the whites of both teeth and eye whites. Although this is the first Miki 2 I've seen in the galleries.
Tissaia
Critiqe Club To previous comments I can add that cropping looks really good too :) Also I agree with pjz99 that teeth have too strong bump map(?) They look little pixelated.
cole4965
Really beautiful face!!!
kobaltkween
Critique Club: she looks sweet! this is well lit, and her lips look beautiful. the sort of graininess on the teeth may be your ambient occlusion. if so, i'd suggest raising the number of samples next time. her eyelids also look a bit thick (a common problem with eF figures), so you might try bringing her eyes forward or changing their scale (if the eye won't scale, turn off bends in the properties of the eye). yay, miki 2.0!
onebaretree
Beautiful render! Gorgeous lighting, expression & skin tones. :-)
SoCalRoberta
The lighting and expression are wonderful:) And I love the soft lips, very life like. The others have mentioned the teeth, inner eyelids and eyes. But on the whole I think you did a great job for the first Miki 2:)
Acadia
She's beautiful. I love the facial expression. I agree about the 3 points already addressed by others (teeth, inner eyelids and the eyes.)
bantha
Great facial expression, great texture. Teeth, inner eyelids and eyes need work, as mentioned.
drifterlee
I love this! Gorgeous!
karanta
Great!!