End in the afternoon by Thandaluz
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Description
One more attempt with landscapes in Bryce.
Critics will be appreciated.
Thank you for seeing.
Comments (11)
FUNJOKER
wow wow wow....Beautiful image..!!....cool:)
Click2Move
cool peacefull image +5
YARDOBE
I think the water/land mix is great...however,I've never really liked the use,or look,rather,of the infinite plane....sure,you may need it,but it doesn't have to show....too linear...sky is nice and moody,but could use a more greenish cast...overall a dang fine job!
IO4
Wonderful tree shapes. This is very well composed:)
fran_joel
Nice overall picture but if you don't mind I'd like to give you a few pointers...(you said you wanted critics... :) ) 1-The lighting is too harsh on the front tree, at least... (the sharp contrast between yellow and black on the branches doesn't look natural to me). It lacks in radiosity, which you could achieve better by using numerous ligths instead of one big bright light. 2-The sky shouldn't meet the ground like that. There should be a haze in the distance, which should be especially visible at the horizon line. 3- The tree model you're using is nice for renders in the distance, as your tree in the background looks quite nice. However the lack of detailing shows too much in the front tree. On the bright side, the water and vegetation is well made and thoughtfully positioned. The color theme of the sky and the landscape is also very nice and eye pleasing.
Burpee
I think the foreground is great and the sky is very dramatic. Wonderfully done!
Thandaluz
Hi Fran. Your comments and suggestions were very important and they will be observed in the next landscape works. I liked your critic. I thank for them. Thanks.
castaneda
Excellent. I love the foreground. And are those Bryce trees? If they are, they are superb just because of that. Look foreward to your next one.
Thandaluz
Hi Castaneda. The trees were reedited in the editor of plants of VUE starting from a tree died. I created again several trees, as soon as has time will send for Free Stuff.
Thelby
You pumpoing out quite an assortment of wonderful images Tharian. This one is Great. I like the trees! They are fabulous display in this beautiful render!!!!
zoren
I believe your composition is excellent with interesting perspective. I also agree with Fran that lighting is key, but then, I find bryce lacking in some abilities.