Knew Your Name by hipps13
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Description
I Read
Young one
Who were you?
I did not know
Knew your name
Only by face
Saw you around
Never smiled
Neither did I
Stuck in my mind
For so many years
Read yesterday
You took your last ride
On a Harley
You loved
Sorry
I never smiled
Sorry
You never smiled back
Comments (11)
Denys234
Nice work!
vaggabondd
Very nice indeed
Richardphotos
it is true, so many people we often pass almost each day and never get past a passing glance. a kind word never exchanges our lips
1010
Try looking and smiling, it works most of the time. Excellent writing!
rainbows
Movingly beautiful writing from you. Hugs. Diane.
lizzibell
Very nice words...
B_PEACOCK
I ahve to agree with Richard . All it takes is just a smile sometimes love doesnt it
Thelby
I missed this one, SORRY!!!! Yes, life is to short for pettiness, Smile Today and receive many smiles in return! The World says what comes around, goes around, but that can be good. In India they call it Karma. In the Bible it is called Sowing and Reaping, but no matter what it is called it is true, we change the place we live by the kind acts and smiles we share Generously!!!
ARTWITHIN
Poignant and it pricks my conscience. Excellent poem and message, Linda. It's short length increases the impact of the message. Hugs, my friend, Suzanne
TallPockets
Thought provoking work and well done! In college, we had to do an 'experiment'. We were instructed to walk by a classmate in the hallways and say, "My dad just died" and see how many stopped in shock or stopped at all? Sadly, NO ONE did. Not sure what that 'says'. My best, T.P.
nikolais
touchy and poignant side of life