Quiet Moment by skobar
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Description
Not sure where I am going with this. I was messing around during my lunch hour and I kinda liked how it was developing, so I am pretty much making up the scene as I go along.
Any comments on what you think I should add or change would be welcomed,I know my character is too dark and the clothes need adjusted and maybe the atmosphere is not quiet right.
Anyway thanks for taking the time to look.
Comments (17)
chachi
I think this looks awesome so far!! One thing I would change though (IMHO) is the broken wall there. It looks too new to have grass growing on it. Maybe rough it up a bit. Other than that, I think she just needs an obvious reason for being there(is she catching a smoke break? Hiding from the boss? Bored?). But overall it's coming along great! -chachi
irakika
Excellent vue work! +5
Schnuck
Wonderful work!!!
Peggy_Walters
I like the background, figure, atmosphere, and ground! But I agree - the wall does not fit with this picture. Wish I had a link for you, but Rodluc had a great freebie for an Abby ruin. Would work much better. Also lighten up the shadows just a bit. They are too dark and detail is lost on the figure's face and clothing. Really good start on this!
garybina
I Think it is awesome as it is
ultim8
Very Nice. I like it a lot, well laid out. A piece of Art for the sake of it!
imagist
I like the scene - Nice depth but would like to have seen some more detail in the character
Tiari
actually i think the wall section would be fine, if you set maybe a faint ambient to it, a dark grey that would make it "softer" to the eye than the sharp darkness of it (more in tune with the atmosphere).
AnAardvark
I think I would more the main light more toward the front to avoid shadowing the figure's face, and to avoid the deep shadow in the ruins. The background might be a little too gray as well, it looks more like a backdrop than something in the distance.
Bea
The wall does look a little strange there - perhaps if yo put a coupel of chunks of stone scattered around? But a lovely scene
Thelby
Nice built scene, love the poser, Great Job!!! 5 by 5 by Me !!!!!
TheAnimaGemini
The scene is stunning. I agree whit Bea. The wall is okay, just put some chunks and stones arround. Excellent!
giorgio_2004
The scene seems ok to me. Just a bit more light on her face, and it will be perfect.
Deadline_Imaging
I think that you have the basis for a great image here, I really do. Since you have already addressed everything I would say in your description, I will shut up now lol. Great start to the image, I definately wanna see where you take this.
lemur01
A fill in light on the figures features would bring them out without affecting too much the lighting of the whole image.
pjz99
Looking great! Composition wise this looks quite cool. I thought about suggesting something to add but it'd really just be clutter, your current arrangement is quite nice and clean just like it is.
vincenthebert
Very nice!!!!!