Killing Tinkerbell by Dryden
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Killing Tinkerbell
And her lips die quick and cold beneath my own
They tremble still,
and her eyes won't close
But you're not here,
because i was never there
She's walking next to him
That was me,
but you've gone silent
I could never make you smile that way
and I can't be him
I can't save what was and what is
I can't
Sleepless, why are you so cold?
I won't let him have you the way i did
Wake up please don't leave again
I can't stand to see you go
I'm not him and I'm not here
I was never there
You're not breathing
You're not mine
Comments (32)
CurtieBear
DLG A bit on the dark side. It shows great promise though. Keep up the good work. :o)
MKeyes
DLG... Yeah, this is too dark to really appreciate. Maybe you can at the very least highlight her face with a point light or spot light? As a WIP this holds a lot of promise.
RundwulfWolfShield
Giving the title and subject matter I believe the lighting is just right. Just my own humble opinion. Great render! I love it!
evoluzione33
DLG Whoa ho ho ho! I think that I may side with Rundwulf on this one! It is dark, but in this case keeping the face in shadow kind of works with the macabre title. Great image!
sjallen03
DLG I agree with MKeyes on this one
Denys234
Excellent image!
lavcea
DLG It is dark but it fits with your poem. I do like her skin texture though - different. -L
thecytron
Awesome texturing work!
Dragonluna1
DLG - Excellent image!!! LOVE it!!
MKruczek
DLG.... Super work. Still, a little more face would be great.
art4all
How dare you!! But who says this is tinkerbell..... do not really recognise her face.... I'd lighted the face not the Bra... I love the title and the idea though
shotgung0d
DLG- - -> Before I join the debate on the lighting I just want to say that this is a great concept and a beautiful render! As far as the lighting goes, yeah it's dark, but I think that might be what you were aiming for. To me the only thing that looks a bit off is the metal surfaces being a little too shiny. This render seems to be walking a tightrope stretched between everyones personal taste.
callad
DLG :) I for one think this is a masterpiece!! Your mood and poem are 100% visible in this splendid render!! For not being able to see her face (and I do am curious for I think she is stunningly beautiful..) one's attention is automatically drawn to her (very well posed) chest and bum. She has a sensationally great outfit and the lighting there is exactly right! And yet... she is not there (no face)... 5+++
Margenal
Dark and sexy, i really love this striking variatioin, you did it really well, congrats!
gandalf_1
DLG... Very dark, indeed! Chilling words to go with it. Brilliant work!!
GARNETROSE
DLG;-]) I dont know. I think the darkness to this peice, like lavcea says, goes well with the poem, adds atmosphere. A well done peice I say
robin123
Me I love it life is not always light, why do we need to see her my mind sees all it need to Appreciate her and this superb render Well done
swjkie100
DLG <--> Not all Poser type renders need to be fully lit. This lighting sets a mood that fits the image and poem to a capital T. Dark and sexy. Example of lighting, in my work "Sub-level 3" I thought the alien had too much light. Some disagreed, and that's fine, but it just isn't dark enough for me, it didn't capture the mood I was trying to create 100%. This work is a fine example of "breaking the mold", which is what we all should strive for! 5+*****
leehilliard
very nice. no comments on the lites from me. it fits the concept imho.keep up the great work.
mhossack
DLG Very nice image. I really like the way it's lit.
Pankaj
Lovely, may a tiny little bit to dark. would really see a bit more of the face. But alll in all a great image!!!
Topaz_Rose
A brilliant job..the darkness is great
Cinnamon369
Very kewl and creepy work, I LOVE IT! Looks great on my screen, I think the shadowing adds that mysterious macabre touch. The texture really does it for me though!
jaynep12002
DLG - I'm with Pankaj - it's a great image and I'd like to see a little bit more of the face. Something like the lighting on Topaz Rose's avatar would fit the theme I think, without spoiling the image. All in all though - great work!
theprojectionist
Tremendous Artwork
TheAnimaGemini
Splendid work. The lightsetting isa killer.
amirapsp
DLG ---> Stunning for sure...Hugs
shanpoo
DLG, Awe I want to see her face!! Love the title really captures your attention...Shannon ;}
mcyak72
DLG, It's very dark and creepy. Great i love it alittle light on tink's face would make it amazing...
thotto
DLG, shudder, but No 2 in the series is better